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bigbcc The ONE and ONLY BigBCC
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| Subject: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Mon Mar 31, 2008 11:20 pm | |
| Anyone who wants a .txt or a .doc copy, I will send a link... PM me if you want in the story XD
Chapter I
We start our adventure in the Kanto region.... Our hero, Bryant, had to move to the region of Torocko.... This region was newly discovered, and his mother, Crystal, being an expert on new Pokémon, elected to move from their pleasant little town called Pallet Town..... This set back Bryant, and his friends’ journey... After being gone for 4 years, he had matured so greatly, and his mother allowed him to move back to their old house in Pallet Town, where he met up with his old friends Chris, John, and Kevin..... “Dude, glad to see you.... We waited for you man,” were Chris’s first words.... “Glad to see all of you too,” replied Bryant. His voice had changed so much since he left to Torocko at the age of 11.... So had his hair, which used to be in a short military style cut. Now was long, and no longer curly. He had dyed it black fading to blue tips, and had it down preventing anyone from seeing his left eye: however, his right eye was still visible. Kevin had not changed that much, he had grown about six inches, and his voice had changed very little, john had not altered as much either.... Chris, on the other hand, he used to have an afro, but now his hair was is braids, and he no longer had glasses, as they have been replaced contacts.... “So, how was it?” asked John. “Yeah,” Kevin added excitedly, “Did you see any new Pokémon?” “Yeah assface, tell us.” Bryant knew that voice all to well, it was a dark, evil hateful, voice..... Gary.... “Must you be a jerk to me still? I have never done anything to you in my life, and no, I did not see any new Pokémon.... Although, my mother captured a few, and she gets to name them after she studies them more....” “Fuckin’ sweet!” exclaimed Chris, “Are you gonna get any?” “I dun---“ Bryant’s Pokégear rang, “Hello, glad to hear your back,” it was Professor Oak. “Glad to be back,” replied Bryant. “I need all of you to come to the lab please,” Oak said importantly. “On our way,” Bryant replied confidently.
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| | | Kevinkjb81 Admin
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Tue Apr 01, 2008 7:44 pm | |
| very interesting... its quite good. | |
| | | bigbcc The ONE and ONLY BigBCC
Number of posts : 167 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-03-14
| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Thu Apr 03, 2008 10:50 pm | |
| Chapter II “Hello there,” exclaimed Professor Oak, “I’m glad you all came.” Bryant looked around, “What did you want us here for Professor?” “Heh... I think I know,” Gary snorted, “You’re giving us our first Pokémon.... Huh Gramps?” “That is correct Gary, but first to choose will be Bryant, then Chris, then Kevin, then John, and you last... Since you are my grandson, and know a lot about Pokémon, you choose last.” “Why? Bryant probably knows more than I---“ Oak interrupted, “But not in this region, and plus you have the advantage of me.” “Now Bryant, there are five Pokémon here... By now, you should know they are withheld inside these Pokéballs,” the professor continued, “Now choose, there is Pikachu, Eevee, Charmander, Bulbasaur, and Squirtle,” Professor Oak stated, “but choose wisely, because this will be you first, and possibly best companion on your journey.” Bryant looked at all the Pokémon... The one that caught his attention the most, was Pikachu... Being an electric type, it attracted him, because he loves lightning, and pretty much anything to do with electricity.... “Professor Oak,” he asked, “is there any way possible to tell me this Pikachu’s personality?” “I’m afraid not Bryant,” Oak explained, “I just captured that one today, on the way back from Viridian City. It was quit hard to capture also, especially since I did not have any Pokémon with me to whittle away at its strength.” “Well,” Bryant began, “is it okay with you if I choose this Pikachu?” “Go ahead,” the professor responded, “but be warned, I do not know exactly how this Pokémon will react to you.” “I understand that Professor Oak,” Bryant said excitedly, “I believe Pikachu and I will make a good combination!”
CHAPTER NOT FINISHED YET
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:44 pm | |
| nice i want squirtle PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
| | | bigbcc The ONE and ONLY BigBCC
Number of posts : 167 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-03-14
| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:28 pm | |
| - Legendary_Trainer wrote:
- nice i want squirtle PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok... you were gonna have eevee... but chris will get him instead LOL | |
| | | Kevinkjb81 Admin
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sat Apr 05, 2008 7:30 pm | |
| CH 2 is coming out to be a good one so far. | |
| | | bigbcc The ONE and ONLY BigBCC
Number of posts : 167 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-03-14
| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 3:29 pm | |
| - Kevinkjb81 wrote:
- CH 2 is coming out to be a good one so far.
LOL thanks Kevin... its gonna be kinda long too LOL | |
| | | Kevinkjb81 Admin
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 3:39 pm | |
| ok. i just added another character to my story. | |
| | | bigbcc The ONE and ONLY BigBCC
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 3:42 pm | |
| - Kevinkjb81 wrote:
- ok. i just added another character to my story.
cool ill go read it... do you think that mine actually sounds like how the real books are? | |
| | | Kevinkjb81 Admin
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 4:01 pm | |
| yeah. except the way we talked in the First Chapter. | |
| | | bigbcc The ONE and ONLY BigBCC
Number of posts : 167 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-03-14
| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 6:44 pm | |
| well i am open for suggestions LOL | |
| | | Kevinkjb81 Admin
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:11 pm | |
| - bigbcc wrote:
- well i am open for suggestions LOL
mainly the way that we write them and the part where Gary called someone an "Assface" | |
| | | bigbcc The ONE and ONLY BigBCC
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 10:44 pm | |
| - Kevinkjb81 wrote:
- bigbcc wrote:
- well i am open for suggestions LOL
mainly the way that we write them and the part where Gary called someone an "Assface" LOL I had to do it... I just had to... thought it would be funny XD | |
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 10:46 pm | |
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| | | bigbcc The ONE and ONLY BigBCC
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| Subject: Re: [{UPDATED 04/04/08}] About Pokemon, but no name yet.... Sun Apr 06, 2008 10:56 pm | |
| - Kevinkjb81 wrote:
- ok.
LOL yup.... did u think it was? | |
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